I actually think that this would make for an AMAZING assignment for students to find a poem and create their own version.
To see how this would work, I took a stab at it myself. Though I have written poetry before, this was something new to me. Most ideas I generate from music and emotions, not necessarily the words of others.
It is Not Right
It is not right to shame
To Call forth HATRED
Its monstrous steed...
Lit the fields burning
Like HELL on Earth
All man's work
It is not right...
While writing this, I was attempting to keep some of Giovanni's lines in mind. She talks about a corrupted government, the KKK, and many other intense topics. I wanted to take those emotions, a similar approach when I compose most of my poetry, and expand into unfamiliar territory, composing a poem based on words of others. I could explain to students, after showing them my poem, how I tried to work within my comfort zone while also trying to learn new techniques. I remained in my Zone of Proximal Development, something I could achieve without much help. If this was very unfamiliar to them, we could compose poems like this with me assisting them, ie: provide more poets they can relate to or give more examples until this becomes familiar and comfortable before exploring a new form. I think a project like this would work for Free verse, a type of poetry that does not need a specific form or rhyme.
EDIT:
So, I was going through a lesson plan I used in my SED 406 class and discovered that I used a Nikki Giovanni poem for the assignment. This is one of her lighter poems and a great example of how versatile she can be with her work.
The assignment I created, when using this poem, introduced students to sonnet and free verse poetry. It was a compare and contrast assignment.
Free verse:
Winter
Poem
Nikki Giovanni
Nikki Giovanni
once a snowflake fell
on my brow and I loved
it so much and I kissed
it and it was happy and called its cousins
5and brothers and a web
of snow engulfed me then
I reached to love them all
and I squeezed them and they became
a spring rain and I stood perfectly
10still and was a flower
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